The most effective revision of sentence 4 would begin with which group of words?

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Sentence An “Invoice and Statement” was received telling me that I owe an operation called:Allstar Football Benefit $29.65 in the mail last week.

The most effective revision of sentence 4 would begin with which group of words?
A . In the mail last week, I received
B . Receiving an “Invoice and Statement,” an operation
C . I owed by being told to me in an “Invoice and Statement”
D . Telling me that I owe in the mail
E . $29.65 is owed by me

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Answer: A